Wow Geni.I liked how you put something at the start so it wasn't boring when it started.Maybe next time you could make it a bit slower so we could read it.And you could cut the end part a little bit. But everything else was epic.Great job.
I like it how you expresiones on what your sister was like and how excited and happy she was. Maybe you could change the length of the video and add some more detail to what you said and some negative and positive effects on what happened or what could happen maybe next time make the slides a bit longer so you can read them.I also liked that you said "this film was made by Geni and not just went into the mane purpose straight away and i liked the fact that it was short and fast and got the main part out the way.And you could also make a reflection on how long it took you to make the video and if anyone helped you or not helpful comments by Saskia
Wow Geni.I liked how you put something at the start so it wasn't boring when it started.Maybe next time you could make it a bit slower so we could read it.And you could cut the end part a little bit.
ReplyDeleteBut everything else was epic.Great job.
Hi there that sounds exciting for izzy!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like it how you expresiones on what your sister was like and how excited and happy she was.
Maybe you could change the length of the video and add some more detail to what you said and some negative and positive effects on what happened or what could happen
maybe next time make the slides a bit longer so you can read them.I also liked that you said "this film was made by Geni and not just went into the mane purpose straight away and i liked the fact that it was short and fast and got the main part out the way.And you could also make a reflection on how long it took you to make the video and if anyone helped you or not
helpful comments by Saskia
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