Wednesday, 26 September 2018

 THE NASTY VISIT AT THE SLEEPOVER 


 “Knock knock” on the door i rushed to open it, yay i thought its my friends i togged the door no one was three i felt scared but at the same time nerose was just my friends playing with me i thought? About one minute later i heard another knock on the door i opened it to my relief it was just my friends come in i said put your stuff down. “Bye” said my parents from upstairs “have a good time girls” “SLAM” my mum and dad shut the door me and my friends we're all alone. I heard water running in the bathroom i rushed to the bathroom the water was red like blood i turned it off and i got even more sacred We all went to bed early because of what happened the next morning my friends said it was a prank

1 comment:

  1. Hi Geni
    I love your story,
    Maybe next time add more show not tell.
    Other that that great job : )
    Here is my blog url if you want to check it out.
    http://odsshaylac.blogspot.com
    Thanks - Shayla. 😀

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