hi geni its portia. great good on your drawing of your tree i love the way you put it. For feedback i would make the writing a little bigger. In that case over all you did amazing your poem just lightnest up the the whole page great job portia.
Hi Geni, Excellent job on your metaphor poem I can tell that you have been practicing your metaphors.I really enjoy how you hand drew your pictures and how you used adjectives to make it more interesting. This reminds me of when there was a big storm and it looked like it was snowing. What did you mean when you said snow is a white fluff tumbling down from the sky? Maybe next time you could work on your punctuation.
hi geni its portia.
ReplyDeletegreat good on your drawing of your tree i love the way you put it. For feedback i would make the writing a little bigger. In that case over all you did amazing your poem just lightnest up the the whole page great job
portia.
Hi Geni,
ReplyDeleteExcellent job on your metaphor poem I can tell that you have been practicing your metaphors.I really enjoy how you hand drew your pictures and how you used adjectives to make it more interesting. This reminds me of when there was a big storm and it looked like it was snowing. What did you mean when you said snow is a white fluff tumbling down from the sky? Maybe next time you could work on your punctuation.