I liked how you don’t just put writing on your blog but your video needed more writing talking in your case, you also needed a hook at the start to get your readers/watchers interested but other then that it was good : ) If you want to check out my blog here’s my URL https://odssashat.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi ya! You probably don't know me but i sure like your blog! Next time i think you could maybe improve on your spelling? I thought maybe when you're publishing you could ask someone to read it to make sure about your spelling? Thanks! Bye!!
Hi Geni This is a awesome wevideo, I love how you used different backdrops to really set in an image. I personally think that you could have added more speech so you could show how much fun the birds are having. Maybe next time double check your spelling or get a partner to proofread it. Other that that great job : ) Here is my blog url if you want to check it out. http://odsshaylac.blogspot.com Thanks - Shayla.
Hi Geni,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you don’t just put writing on your blog but your video needed more writing talking in your case, you also needed a hook at the start to get your readers/watchers interested but other then that it was good : ) If you want to check out my blog here’s my URL https://odssashat.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi ya! You probably don't know me but i sure like your blog!
ReplyDeleteNext time i think you could maybe improve on your spelling?
I thought maybe when you're publishing you could ask someone to read it to make sure about your spelling? Thanks! Bye!!
Hi Geni
ReplyDeleteThis is a awesome wevideo, I love how you used different backdrops to really set in an image. I personally think that you could have added more speech so you could show how much fun the birds are having. Maybe next time double check your spelling or get a partner to proofread it. Other that that great job : )
Here is my blog url if you want to check it out.
http://odsshaylac.blogspot.com
Thanks - Shayla.