The bloody shoes
There once was a girl called Lily she was spoiled with riches and jewels she had whatever she wanted. her father was an author called James Buttintochs she used to get teased at school for that name but now no one talks to her now because she is big bad bully she is the meanest of the meanest she would swack people with skipping ropes and when it was lunchtime she splat people food into their faces but the worst of all she was known to steal even though she was rich she would still steal from people. One day out in the market on a Saturday morning lily would tiptoe around looking for pray… to be finished when I have time
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Carine😇
Hi what are you guys doing tonight Im doing my homework.
Geni 👑
Isabella ^_^
Bella 😵
Lara😎
Hi Geni! Good post! I like how your story was based on the 'Bloody Shoes'. Maybe next time you could ask me before using my name in your story! And maybe I could teach you how to upload a document onto your blog properly, because all your words are of the page! And what I don't get is that 'Talk' thing at the bottom of your post! What does it mean?!
ReplyDeleteHi Geni, I like your story but maybe you could update it because I want to read more! Maybe you could also figure out a way to make it not go off the page? Other than that it is great! Im not sure I understand "Talk" but if you put a discription im sure it would make a lot more sense.
ReplyDeleteGreat work
Ruby